By Dylan
Bob Sheldon was a soc and lived in Tulsa, Oklahoma and was killed at age 18. What happen was that he and his friend were looking for fight. They decided to go to the lower class of town and found two boys. The friends Randy and Ted got out of the car and they all started to beat up these's to boys at the park.
This accrued November 10th 1983 at 11: 30. Johnny Cade was a greaser at age 18 with his friend Pony boy Curtis who was also a greaser and he was 16 and they also lived in Tulsa. Johnny and Pony boy were the two boys in the park.
Johnny stabbed bob because he was drowning Bob. After he stabbed Bob the other kids fled the scene. Johnny and Pony boy then went to get help from another greaser and went to the church in Winderxville to Jay Mountain.
Name of Critic – Nefer
ReplyDeleteAuthor of blog – Dylan
Positive Comments – He got all the details right.
Things the author could have done better – He shoul've used spell check and checked his punctuation.
What (if any) items were missing from the blog? None.