By Christian
In 1942 in the city of Poland two Germans were separating a child from he's father. In 60 year's that boy will become none as magneto. He has supernatural powers. He can move metal with his mind. There are other people with supernatural power's.
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Name of Critic –Jonathan
ReplyDeleteAuthor of blog –Christian
Positive Comments – You got Magneto's name right and you blogged about what a lot of people are interested in.
Things the author could have done better - You made a lot of spelling mistakes.
What (if any) items were missing from the blog? how,and why
Name of Critic –isai
ReplyDeleteAuthor of blog – chris
Positive Comments – i love xmen and magnito is awesome and your topic is verty intresting
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What (if any) items were missing from the blog?
Name of Critic –Lupita
ReplyDeleteAuthor of blog –Chris
Positive Comments –
I liked your start and your topic.
Things the author could have done better –
You should have check grammar and wrote more.
What (if any) items were missing from the blog?
He is still missing what and how and where.