By Nefer
Johnny and Ponyboy fell asleep in an empty lot after killing a soc. When Ponyboy got home at two in the morning his big brother Darry hit him. Ponyboy got mad and ran back to Johnny they wanted to run away so they went to a party where Dally was and asked him for money and advice on where to go. Dally said to get on a train to Windrixville and climb to the church at the top of the mountain and stay there until he went to go get them.
Dallas Winston, Ponyboy, Curtis and, Johnny Cade were driving by a church in Windrixville, Tulsa. Dally noticed it was burning and Johnny jumped out of the car, Ponyboy followed him into the church. They found the children scared inside the church and handed them to Dally out the window. Ponyboy got out after all of the kids but Johnny couldn't get out because a burning piece of wood fell across his back.
Name of Critic – Angela
ReplyDeletePositive Comments – Story was very good.
Things the author could have done better – Fix the beginning of the story when it says that Johnny and Ponyboy were sleeping at the lot after killing a socs. but they just fell asleep at the lot, then Ponyboy woke up and went to his house. Then that was when his older brother hit him and then Ponyboy ran away. That is when Ponyboy and Johnny saw the socs. at the park and Johnny killed one of the socs.
What (if any) items were missing from the blog? She forgot the when.