Thursday, September 9, 2010

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By Kenneth

There has been over 13 un solved cases in vice city .

Today vice city police are re-opening the case.

The victim was 5\5 feet tall died 3:57am 1994 august 17 the victim name was mike dud was a male and was murdered with a crow bar.

He died at Newport beach there was a missing his wallet there was a murder weapon it was a crow bar.

1 comment:

  1. Name of Critic –Jonathan
    Author of blog –Kenneth
    Positive Comments –It's not the worst blog I've read.


    Things the author could have done better – He could have made sense and use spell check.


    What (if any) items were missing from the blog?
    how, and why.

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