By Lupita
Last night Ponyboy Curtis and his friends Jonny and Steve got in
a big fight with two socs on the side of the road. They were trying
to pick up two girls Cherry Valance and Marsha at the drive-in
theater. The cause of the fight is not fully known but it is thought
that alcohol was involved. However they main cause of the fight
was because Cherry and Marsh left their drunken boyfriends at
the drive-in and watched the movie without their boyfriends and
were with greasers.
After a while of sitting there watching the movie Ponyboy
Steve and Jonny sat behind them. First Steve was reportedly
being rude to Cherry and Marsha and then the girls got fed up
with the rude was Steve was treating them so they made him
leave. Jonny and Ponyboy however stayed with Cherry and
Marsha. All four of them stayed and watched the movie happily.
Things drastically changed on their way home. Ponyboy and
Jonny were reportedly planning to walk Cherry and Marsha
home when The Socs came up behind the group and got out
trying to start a fight. The boys calmy started walking away.
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Name of Critic – Yareli
ReplyDeleteAuthor of blog – Lupita
Positive Comments – You have a lot of details.
Things the author could have done better – Check spelling
What (if any) items were missing from the blog? Your not missing anything.
Name of Critic – Jesus
ReplyDeleteAuthor of blog – Lupita
Positive Comments – Cool and you got a lot of details.