By Karlie
Darrel Curtis slapped his younger brother Ponyboy Curtis, this event took in Tulsa,Oklahoma on the date May 5, 1967. He slapped his bother because Ponyboy got home very late, because he acceptably fell asleep in the park. And he got home late is brother says he was nerves and was scared to no what happened. When Ponyboy finally got home he slapped him for not
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Name of Critic – Samantha
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Positive Comments – I like the detail and how you put the story together.
Things the author could have done better – Just watch your spelling
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Name of Critic – Avi
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Positive Comments – You chose a good topic.
Things the author could have done better – Check your spelling.
What (if any) items were missing from the blog? you are missing what.